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Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (Services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (Services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? qV5r5

Modern world seems to be fast moving, owing to the fact of advancements and incessant changes. Over the period, we can find that many people have lost patience and would want to action on things immediately. This may be because of their changing lifestyle. I feel that this trend has both beneficial and gloomy effects. This essay would describe both the development in the following paragraphs. Firstly, everybody’s aim is to move forward in their life. During this event, people try to balance their professional and personal life, hence they no time to wait. Technology has amplified the well-being of indviduals. For example, any person can browse google to acquire knowledge at any time and they do not have to depend on books or elders. Besides, people want to get things without delay because they consider the time valuable. In certain workplaces, Superior request to complete the task on day-to-day basis, in order to feel less burdened. I personally, feel that postponing the actions to be performed can cause serious frustrations. Secondly, it is can be understood that people have less time in this hurry-sick life. However, this trend can lead to several health issues both mentally and physically. Moreover, getting things immediately as resulted in impatience among the people! Consequently, the ability to empathize and to be considerate on others has been seriously falling. For example, in workplace supervisors tend to push their workers to great extent in order to compete the assigned task without any delay. To Conclude, Advancements and lifestyle changes has paved the way for people to get things immediately. Like every rose plant has thorns, this trend has both beneficial and adverse impacts that cannot be ignored. From my viewpoint, I feel that idea of wanting things without delay is positive growth, but the harsh means involved to execute this idea is cynical development.

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 have less You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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. Moreover
, getting things immediately as resulted in impatience among the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
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, the ability to empathize and to be considerate on others has been seriously
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, in workplace supervisors tend to push their workers to great extent in order to compete the assigned task without any delay.

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