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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In this Contemporary World, travelling is the biggest hobby of any human being. Nowadays, Owing to hectic schedule, people wants to retreat from work and travel in search of happiness. It is primary beleif of one group of people that this trend has a negative influence on the nation travel to. I partially agree with this statement and give my stand with some strong arguments and examples as well in the subsequent paragraphs. To commance with, Travel to international places brings enormous benefits for tourist. Among them, the first one is let the know about exotic culture and the life style. Tpurists receive a merit of to explore the foreign culture in details. In addition to this, They also learn about the history of a particular area. Due to having a busy schedule, Travellers take a breath of releive on international trips. To examplify this, 6 out of 10 people have a depth knowledge about exotic culture just beacuse of travelling. Moreover, Another major advantage is sucess in business department. If tourists are familiar with the life style and language then they able to expand their business at a vast distance. Travellers acquire an opportunity to represent their culture in foreign. On the contrary, Tourism also brings plethora of drawbacks for any nation. Firstly, One of the vital and crucial demerit is pollution. However, It is arduous for travellers to use public transport because the place is totally unknown. Thus, this thought of school leads overloaded pollution of noise, air and often water too. For instance, At present Cuba has a more tourists than past but along with tourists it also has a vast amount of pollution too. To conclude, Travelling bring benefits and drawback to any foreign country but it's valuable advantages put quite behind it's ignorable disadvantages.
In this Contemporary World, travelling is the biggest hobby of any human being. Nowadays, Owing to hectic schedule,
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people
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some
strong arguments and examples
as well
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paragraphs
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commance
with, Travel to international places brings enormous benefits for
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tourist
. Among them, the
first
one is
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let
the know about exotic
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culture
and the life style.
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Tpurists
receive a merit of to explore the foreign
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culture
in
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details
.
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to this, They
also
learn about the history of a particular area. Due to having a busy schedule,
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Travellers
take a breath of
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releive
on international trips. To
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examplify
this,

6 out of 10
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people
have a depth knowledge about exotic
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culture
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beacuse
of travelling.
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, Another major advantage is
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sucess
in business department. If
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tourists
are familiar with the life style and language then
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able to expand their business at a vast distance.
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Travellers
acquire an opportunity to
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represent


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their
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culture
in foreign.

On the contrary
, Tourism
also
brings plethora of drawbacks for any nation.
Firstly
, One of the vital and crucial demerit is pollution.
However
, It is arduous for
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travellers
to
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use
public transport
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because
the place is
totally
unknown.
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, this
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thought
of school leads overloaded pollution of noise, air and
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often
water too.
For instance
, At present Cuba has a more
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tourists
than past
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but
along with
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tourists
it
also
has a
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vast


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amount
of pollution too.

To conclude
, Travelling bring benefits and drawback to any foreign country
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but
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put quite behind
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it's ignorable disadvantages
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IELTS essay Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to.

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