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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. DlNdm

In today's world because of the technological advancements, cheaper flight a number of people travel to the different part of the world for delight. However, some people consider that this trend will have nagative outcomes on the nations travelled to. From my perspective, tourism industry has countless positive effects on both government and individuals itself. First of all, it is brazenly obvious that, tourism industry boost the country GDP(gross domestic product) and create a number of new job opportunity for the local people. Firstly, tourist spend money on a wide range of services such as hotels, restaurants, transportation and medical servicies. Thus, tourism yields an additional income, grearly supporting the country's economy. Secondly, tourism increases the level of employement by bringing additional vacancies. As a result, companies hire more staff for meeting the demand such as waitiress, tour guided and hotel workers. Moreover,

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