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"Nowadays, many people say that we shouldn't trust anyone online. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?"

"Nowadays, many people say that we shouldn't trust anyone online. with this statement? " yDe2V
In the era of digital media where everything occurred online, some argued that people shouldn’t believe in anyone online. From my perspective, I mostly disagree but I can see this outlook has both sides. There is a tremendous reason why people can trust someone online. Firstly, with the development of technology, there is a range of jobs and services that require working online. Especially, because of the effects of Covid-19, we must work from home so it makes sense to have trust. Nonetheless, the cyber climate has a strong increasing trend recently, they commonly hack or sell private information for horrible purposes. For that reason, various people become suspicious and can’t believe anyone online. In my view of point, people should consider carefully when exchanging confidential direction as well as personal information online instead of not trusting anyone.
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sense to have trust. Nonetheless, the cyber climate has a strong increasing trend recently, they
commonly
hack or sell private information for horrible purposes. For that reason, various
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people
become suspicious and can’t believe anyone
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online
. In my view of point,
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people
should consider
carefully
when exchanging confidential direction
as well
as personal information
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online
instead
of not trusting anyone.
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IELTS essay "Nowadays, many people say that we shouldn't trust anyone online. with this statement? "

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