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Children trying their utmost at whatever they do

Children trying their utmost at whatever they do Age5X

While some people are convinced that kids ought to try their utmost at whatever they do, others claim that it is not mandatory. Personally, I am agree with the former point of view. On one hand, some believe it is not necessary to attempt to be the top performer. Adults can not force them to be the best at all activities, considering that all children have their own unique strengths and weaknesses. It is sometimes a burden for children, making them suffer from stress and this is detrimental to their mental health. Moreover, trying to be the top leader, pulling all-nighter, over-practicing, etc. leads to physical health, affecting the child's upbringing.

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some
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stress
 and this is detrimental to their mental health. Moreover
, trying to be the top leader, pulling all-nighter, over-practicing, etc. leads to physical health, affecting the child's upbringing. 