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Nowadays many people go shopping in their free time. Shopping has replaced many other activities that people used to choose as their hobby.

Nowadays many people go shopping in their free time. Shopping has replaced many other activities that people used to choose as their hobby. N7Mg

it is true that shopping was considered as a daily necessary task previously. but in recent decades, many individuals make it as a passion. i completely agree with this statement. In previous time, people were not much aware of fashion. so they kept daily necessary groccerries in the market list for buying. similarly, markets were not available to the nearest place, therefore, people could not think to shop regularly. Also, the economic condition was not favorable to the ancient people as well. So people took shopping as a daily necessary house hold task. on the other hand, in recent times, shopping has been considered as a hobby to all ages of public society. First of all, the huge varieties of daily needs products are available with affordable price which attract all ages of customers specially the younger ones. another reason behind this is called the competition in social media which actually makes all individuals concern about the life style they are belonging. specially the the woman and teenagers are seen in the shopping centre very frequently. because of new fashioned products such as cloths, ornaments, make-up etc are in the top priority list among them. perhaps another key consideration is the availability of super shop center and huge supply of fashioned products which attracts all the people because of its marketing like packaging and pricing. from my perspective, not only business competition is growing but also the level of consumption is is increasing every sector of our life. so people make shopping as their daily task for exploring something new.

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it
 is true that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
was considered
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daily
 necessary task previously. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
 in recent decades, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 individuals This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it as a passion. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this statement.

In previous time, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 were not much aware of fashion. Use a comma before 'so' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short)., so
so
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregularlyoftenperiodicconstantlyregularroutine
daily
 necessary Possible spelling mistake found.groceries
groccerries
 in the market list for buying. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSimilarly
similarly
, markets were not available to the nearest place, therefore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 could not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 to shop regularly
. Also
, the economic condition was not favorable to the ancient You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
as well
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 took You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregularlyoftenperiodicconstantlyregularroutine
daily
 necessary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 hold task.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 the other hand, in recent times, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 has been considered
 as a hobby to all ages of public society. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the huge varieties of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregularlyoftenperiodicconstantlyregularroutine
daily
 needs products are available with affordable price which attract all ages of customers specially
 the younger ones. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnother
another
 reason behind this is called
 the competition in social media which actually This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 all individuals concern about the life style they The verb 'belonging' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are belonging
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSpecially
specially
Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 woman and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
frequently
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBecause
because
 of new fashioned products such as cloths, ornaments, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
-up etc are in the top priority list among them. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPerhaps
perhaps
 another key consideration is the availability of super shop center and huge supply of fashioned products which attracts all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of its marketing like packaging and pricing.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFrom
from
 my perspective, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 business competition is growing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 the level of consumption Possible typo: you repeated a wordis
is is
 increasing every sector of our life. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 as their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregularlyoftenperiodicconstantlyregularroutine
daily
 task for exploring something new. 