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nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or oganisation.why might this be the case?what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

One of aspirations of university graduated is getting outcome from the subject that they have studied for long years which can be an award for their hard attempts. It can be concluded of either stablish a carrier by yourself or hiring in other's office that euthustatics of first view are increasing contemporary. This essay will mention some reason of this elected and their obstacles. First positive point of having your own business is freedom of operation. it means tat, there is no force for yourself to behave based on others orders. the first and foremost character to lay down roles is yourself. As a boss, it is your turn to not only selecting aims and objections but also applause your employments by creating friendly while respectful atmosphere in order to generally progress. Having chance to be more innovation is another reason. Take a architecture company for instance. there are many bridges and routes all over the world that had builded as same as each others, however most of this compony are following permenant steps. Creating new approach of sight to solve relentless problems, promoting you much more than others in this professional competition. In contrast, the difficulties of leading a compony such as captain of a ship has a lot of uneasy situations that make your mind buzzing all day everyday, still you are in vacation or on family weekend. In other word, it can discreetly impact on your both social and private communication which can lead to broken home. Furthermore, if you cannot affording your payments while you are working hard, many of your staffs will be unemployed. to sum up, although the benefits of being your own boss cannot be limited into some cases, there are many obstacles, too. Personaly, i belive that there is no indispensible needs for everyone to construct their own ways. it is down to earth to recognize our both ability and character so that we can make decisions more consiously.
One of aspirations of university graduated is getting outcome from the subject that they have studied for long years which can be an award for their
hard
attempts. It can
be concluded
of either stablish a carrier by yourself or hiring in other's office that euthustatics of
first
view are increasing contemporary. This essay will mention
some
reason of this elected and their obstacles.
First
positive
point of having your
own
business is freedom of operation. it means tat, there is no force for yourself to behave based on others orders. the
first
and foremost character to lay down roles is yourself. As a boss, it is your turn to not
only
selecting aims and objections
but
also
applause your employments by creating friendly while respectful atmosphere in order to
generally
progress. Having chance to be more innovation is another reason. Take a architecture
company
for instance
. there are
many
bridges and routes all over the world that had builded as same as each others,
however
most of this compony are following permenant steps. Creating new approach of sight to solve relentless problems, promoting you much more than others in this professional competition.
In contrast
, the difficulties of leading a compony such as captain of a ship has
a lot of
uneasy situations that
make
your mind buzzing all day everyday,
still
you are in vacation or on family weekend. In
other
word, it can
discreetly
impact on your both social and private communication which can lead to broken home.
Furthermore
, if you cannot affording your payments while you are working
hard
,
many
of your staffs will
be unemployed
. to sum up, although the benefits of being your
own
boss cannot
be limited
into
some
cases, there are
many
obstacles, too.
Personaly
, i belive that there is no indispensible needs for everyone to construct their
own
ways. it is down to earth to recognize our both ability and character
so
that we can
make
decisions more
consiously
.
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IELTS essay nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or oganisation. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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