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talk about important experience that you recently had .Describe what happened.and explain why it was important to you?

well, taking about my experience that i had was, when i was selected as the president of " Baal Sanskar Aviyan''. in my hometown Butwal. I was quite panic at that moment, because that was my first and first experience in the stage. when i get into the stage i found many people in the hall which made more nervous. Actually, i got selected because of my good leadership and good commanding which i letter get to know from the committe of this project and i admire to that. we used to conduct the programme like speech compitition, quiz and many volunteering programme which made me habitualized with this and now i can developed the habit of developing the self confidance, leading the programme, as this is very important to me.
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to conduct the programme like speech compitition, quiz and
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volunteering programme which made me habitualized with this and
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i can developed the habit of developing the self confidance, leading the programme, as this is
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IELTS essay talk about important experience that you recently had. Describe what happened. and explain why it was important to you?

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