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Does creativity matter to support workers' careers?/

Many industries need the right strategies to upscale their businesses in the 4. 0 industrial. Those strategies aim to meet higher efficiency on production, expansion to new markets, and competency in the global business. One of the strategies is creating skilled workers, ready to face human resources, to meet requirements in the 4. 0 industrial revolution. As demands of skilled workers increase, requirements to meet also remain challenging. For example, many companies today require workers to fulfill both hard skills and soft skills. According to Linkedin situs, it is important to balance both the hard skills and soft skills of workers. One of the soft skills, creativity, is becoming a great source of help to employees to do their jobs. As creativity contributes to developing employees’ careers, the development of it is becoming crucial. Parlamis found that possessing creativity is a CORE, a competency that must have by job seekers to meet job criteria.
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higher efficiency on production, expansion to new markets, and competency in the global business. One of the strategies is creating skilled
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, ready to face human resources, to
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requirements in the 4. 0 industrial revolution. As demands of skilled
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increase, requirements to
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, creativity, is becoming a great source of
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to employees to do their jobs. As creativity contributes to developing employees’ careers, the development of it is becoming crucial. Parlamis found that possessing creativity is a CORE, a competency that
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IELTS essay Does creativity matter to support workers' careers? /

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
154 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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