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nowadays many people are doing things instantly why is it do you think is it a positive or negative development

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the technological development have been taken place in 21st century there have been immense changes take care in individuals life nowadays people want to complete a work in short period of time the statement contains some positive or negative points for at the very outset there are a lot of reasons why masses which to get things done fast for sale in the modern time people are employed and they have a lot of work to do due to which the also get depressed for this they want to complete their work instantly to get some free time for the family or friends moreover some time people want to work fast you too with the assertive and wish to work more and more money contrary to the above discussion there are many positive and negative problems but in my point of use it is false development become known as the work which is done very fast it always the wrong people facing many problem for the more sometime due to the working masters get injured or die and in any accident and their family members become sad to conclude all the sometime the work is which is done by person become the key of success than her but sometime it also harmful for them it have equal merits and demerits
the
technological development have
been taken
place in 21st century there have been immense
changes
take care in individuals life nowadays
people
want to complete a
work
in short period of
time
the statement contains
some
positive
or
negative
points for at the
very
outset there are
a lot of
reasons why masses which to
get
things done
fast
for sale in the modern
time
people
are
employed and
they have
a lot of
work
to do due to which the
also
get
depressed for this they want to complete their
work
instantly
to
get
some
free
time
for the family or friends
moreover
some
time
people
want to
work
fast
you too with the assertive and wish to
work
more and more money contrary to the above discussion there are
many
positive
and
negative
problems
but
in my point of
use
it is false development become known as the
work
which
is done
very
fast
it always the
wrong
people
facing
many problem
for the more sometime due to the working masters
get
injured or
die
and in any accident and their family members become sad
to conclude
all
the sometime the
work
is which
is done
by person become the key of success than her
but
sometime
it
also
harmful for them it
have
equal merits and demerits
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IELTS essay nowadays many people are doing things instantly why is it do you think is it a positive or negative development

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