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Nowadays many developed and developing countries are making research on space application individually and collectively which may lead to space travel what are the advantage and disadvantaged.

Nowadays many developed and developing countries are making research on space application individually and collectively which may lead to space travel what are the advantage and disadvantaged. g5b93
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IELTS essay Nowadays many developed and developing countries are making research on space application individually and collectively which may lead to space travel what are the advantage and disadvantaged.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
334 words
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