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Nowadays, lots of household waste is a problem. What is the cause of this problem and how can we solve the issue?

Nowadays, lots of household waste is a problem. What is the cause of this problem and how can we solve the issue? wB77Y
Today we live in an era where so much rubbish from home causes a lot of trouble. The amount of litter is rising because of several reasons. This essay will deal with the causes of the increasing amount of waste and how it affects the environment and suggest some way to overcome it. The most serious impact of this situation is on the environment. People consumptively shop for various kinds of goods that may not be environmentally friendly, and then disposed of in the landfill and cause soil and water pollution. Mixing food waste or kitchen scraps with non-organic objects can also cause gases that are harmful to the environment. Moreover, destroying used plastics and Styrofoam are becoming a major problem everywhere especially in Indonesia because these things are difficult to destroy. The first reason for the rising amount of rubbish is the high consumptive nature of today's society. People are given many choices in life that encourage them to buy new things. Secondly, not everyone consciously sorts out the waste generated from their homes. Some of them still mix all kinds of garbage in one place. In addition, sometimes an unstructured waste management system causes all the collected waste to end up piling up in a landfill. The third reason is that many goods manufacturers still use too much packaging such as single-use plastic to wrap their products, resulting in a lot of waste. Currently, cooperation from several parties is needed to overcome the bad effects of waste. People have to be aware of the disastrous consequences of consumerism. Besides that, they also need to learn to be responsible for sorting their own waste. People should buy only what is necessary. As far as possible, excessive packaging should be avoided. Furthermore, the government should encourage some industries to use an alternative way to package their products. To sum up, public awareness in choosing, buying, and being responsible for sorting waste is the key to protecting the environment. Besides, regulations and supervision from the government regarding the packaging of goods are also important to overcome the environment problem.
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trouble. The amount of litter is rising
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because
of several reasons. This essay will deal with the
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causes
of the increasing amount of
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waste
and how it affects the
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environment
and suggest
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some
way to overcome it.

The most serious impact of this situation is on the
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environment
.
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People
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consumptively
shop for various kinds of
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goods
that may not be
environmentally
friendly, and then disposed of in the landfill and
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cause
soil and water pollution. Mixing food
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waste
or kitchen scraps with non-organic objects can
also
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cause
gases that are harmful to the
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environment
.
Moreover
, destroying
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used
plastics and Styrofoam are becoming a major problem everywhere
especially
in Indonesia
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because
these things are difficult to
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destroy
.

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first
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waste
generated from their homes.
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of them
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In addition
,
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sometimes
an unstructured
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waste
management system
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all the collected
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waste
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up piling up
in a landfill. The third reason is that
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goods
manufacturers
still
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use
too much packaging such as single-
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use
plastic to wrap their products, resulting in
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a lot of
waste.

Currently
, cooperation from several parties
is needed
to overcome the
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bad
effects of
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waste
.
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be aware of the disastrous consequences of consumerism.
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buy
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what is necessary. As far as possible, excessive packaging should
be avoided
.
Furthermore
, the
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government
should encourage
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some
industries to
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use
an alternative way to package their products.

To sum up, public awareness in choosing, buying, and being responsible for sorting
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waste
is the key to protecting the
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environment
.
Besides
, regulations and supervision from the
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government
regarding the packaging of
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goods
are
also
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important
to overcome the
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environment
problem.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, lots of household waste is a problem. What is the cause of this problem and how can we solve the issue?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
348 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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