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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays, large shopping malls are becoming more popular than small local shops. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

Currently, Brand shopping malls are one of the blooming business than domestic retail shops. In this essay, I would like to present the negative impact and development of shopping centers with appropriate examples. Firstly, Arcade has been inducing a huge impact on the mindset of young people as it is composed of various branded factory outlets and affects the economic growth of the small centers. Even though, they provide quality products as such. The fame that people possess while persuading from such malls is influencing all others to visit it. But, I have also seen that older generations are preferring local retails shops for the factors like prices that in return boost up the small-scale business pupils. To add up the perspective, the shopping centers are a place where all the requirements are available within an occupied space and thus reducing the people's time and energy. Even though they charge the consumers, the highest price including all kinds of taxes like CGST, SGST, maintenance, rented space, people is promoting the habit of visiting it. For instance, I went to buy branded jeans in both the mall and the small shop, to my surprise I found that there was a 10 % price variation although the dress possesses the same brand name, fabric texture, and quality. To conclude the essay, I think, it is the people's idea and lethargic habit that resulted in the pessimistic growth for the domestic retail shops and increased the demand for branding malls among the generations.

Currently
, Brand shopping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
malls
 are one of the blooming business than domestic retail You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
. In this essay, I would like to present the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact and development of shopping centers with appropriate examples.

Firstly
, Arcade has been inducing a huge impact on the mindset of young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 as it is composed
 of various branded factory outlets and affects the economic growth of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 centers. Even though
, they provide quality products as such. The fame that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 possess while persuading from such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
malls
 is influencing all others to visit it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, I have also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that older generations The verb ‘prefer’ can be stative. If ‘preferring’ describes a state, change the sentence structure and use the base form of the verb.
are preferring
 local retails You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
 for the factors like prices that in return boost up the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
-scale business pupils.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 up the perspective, the shopping centers are a place where all the requirements are available within an occupied space and thus
 reducing the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's time and energy. Even though
 they charge the consumers, the highest price including all kinds of taxes like Possible spelling mistake found.CASTCOSTCSTCYSTCGSCEST
CGST
, SGST, maintenance, rented space, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
If ‘people’ is plural here, don’t use the third-person singular verb.are
is
 promoting the habit of visiting it.

For instance
, I went to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 branded jeans in both the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 and the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
, to my surprise I found that there was a 10 % price variation although the dress possesses the same brand name, fabric texture, and quality.

To conclude
 the essay, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
, it is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 and lethargic habit that resulted in the pessimistic growth for the domestic retail You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
 and increased the demand for branding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
malls
 among the generations. 