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Nowadays, demand for practical education is increasing, and more children from the age 11 or 13 choose to go to schools to learn more practical skills rather than academic education.

Nowadays, demand for practical education is increasing, and more children from the age 11 or 13 choose to go to schools to learn more practical skills rather than academic education. 3ePw

Nowadays, demand for practical education is increasing, and more children from the age 11 or 13 choose to go to schools to learn more practical skills rather than academic education. In my opinion this is misconception to compare them in isolation from one another because academic education and practical education go hand by hand. First of all we must point out that learning main subjects like English, Art, Mathematics and various languages cannot be avoided in the early stage of education, because it is the basis for the further practical skills, which required for any job. But in order to ensure that children do not lose the knowledge they have acquired, they need to strengthen it in practice. This is the main correlation between these two types of education.

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