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In order to solve traffic problems government should tax private car owners heavily and use their money to improve public transportation what are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution

In order to solve traffic problems government should tax private car owners heavily and use their money to improve public transportation what are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution n9l2
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IELTS essay In order to solve traffic problems government should tax private car owners heavily and use their money to improve public transportation what are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
323 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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