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Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you think this is necessary or will children acquire these skills naturally from their daily interaction with technology everywhere?

cs: Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? Why? Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Every country should produce enough of everything that the country needs so it does not have to rely on imports. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you think this is necessary or will children acquire these skills naturally from their daily interaction with technology everywhere?
cs
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Do you
think
it is better for students to work
before
their university study? Why?

Some
people
believe that the most
important
aspect of their job is their salary. Others
think
that the job itself is the most
important
. What do you
think
is the most
important
aspect of a job?

Every country should produce
enough
of everything that the country needs
so
it does not
have to
rely on imports. Do you
agree
or disagree with this statement?

Many
people
say that
globalisation
and the growing number of multinational
companies
have a
negative
effect on the environment. To what extent do you
agree
or disagree?

Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you
think
this is necessary or will children acquire these
skills
naturally
from their daily interaction with technology everywhere?
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IELTS essay Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you think this is necessary or will children acquire these skills naturally from their daily interaction with technology everywhere?

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