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Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you think this is necessary or will children acquire these skills naturally from their daily interaction with technology everywhere?

cs: Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? Why? Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Every country should produce enough of everything that the country needs so it does not have to rely on imports. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you think this is necessary or will children acquire these skills naturally from their daily interaction with technology everywhere?
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it is better for students to work
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before
their university study? Why?

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people
believe that the most
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important
aspect of their job is their salary. Others
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think
that the job itself is the most
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important
. What do you
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think
is the most
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aspect of a job?

Every country should produce
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enough
of everything that the country needs
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so
it does not
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have to
rely on imports. Do you
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agree
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Many
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people
say that
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globalisation
and the growing number of multinational
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companies
have a
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negative
effect on the environment. To what extent do you
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agree
or disagree?

Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you
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think
this is necessary or will children acquire these
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skills
naturally
from their daily interaction with technology everywhere?

IELTS essay Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you think this is necessary or will children acquire these skills naturally from their daily interaction with technology everywhere?

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138 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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