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Nowadays cheap air travel is increasingly popular in the world. To what extent do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays cheap air travel is increasingly popular in the world. GMwlx
To meet the needs of people to lower their travelling cost, cheap air travel has been admitted and welcomed in an outstanding degree. What I tend to believe, obviously, is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Firstly, cheap air travel offers a more flexible travelling mode for most people, such as businessmen and travelers, which in fact, can to a large extent save their time, and money as well. In recent years, people have been living in a cost-control lifestyle. Through cheap air travel, people can reduce their unnecessary expense in order to arrange their budget and enhance their daily efficiency for the sake that sometimes cheap air tickets cost even less than the airport taxes. Furthermore, cheap air travel may gain a double-win, triple-win or even multi-win in the aspects of travel, business, transportation and so forth because cheap air travels not only shorten long distance, but also creat more business opportunities and travel events. It might be too time-consuming or too remote for people that cannot be easily arrived by normal transportations like trains and cars, which, on the contrary, would not be make-believe for cheap air travel. However, some people might list several reasons to opposite cheap air travels that the safety test standards may be lowered by the air service companies in order to control their cost or cheap air travels may cause the pollution of the environment. These worries are reasonable, but what we need to do is set a set of more standardized and perfect rules, systems and laws to take air flight markets under control instead of forbidding cheap air travels itself. All in all, cheap air travel should be encouraged because air flight is now becoming a main tendency in this fast developing era, and it is undeniable that it makes our life easier and more convenient with more options, rather than price tags.
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to lower their travelling cost,
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air
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travel
has
been admitted
and welcomed in an outstanding degree. What I tend to believe,
obviously
, is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Firstly
,
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cheap
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air
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travel
offers a more flexible travelling mode for most
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people
, such as businessmen and travelers, which in fact, can to a large extent save their time, and money
as well
. In recent years,
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people
have been living in a cost-control lifestyle. Through
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cheap
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air
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travel
,
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people
can
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reduce
their unnecessary expense in order to arrange their budget and enhance their daily efficiency for the sake that
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sometimes
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cheap
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air
tickets cost even less than the airport taxes.

Furthermore
,
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cheap
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air
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travel
may gain a double-win, triple-win or even multi-win in the aspects of
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travel
, business, transportation and
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forth
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travels
not
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shorten long distance,
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also
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creat
more business opportunities and
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travel
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events
. It might be too time-consuming or too remote for
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people
that cannot be
easily
arrived by normal transportations like trains and cars, which,
on the contrary
, would not be
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make
-believe for
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travel.

However
,
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some
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people
might list several reasons to opposite
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cheap
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air
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travels
that the safety
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standards may
be lowered
by the
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air
service
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companies
in order to control their cost or
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cheap
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air
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travels
may cause the pollution of the environment. These worries are reasonable,
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but
what we need to do
is set
a set of more standardized and perfect
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rules
, systems and laws to take
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air
flight markets under control
instead
of forbidding
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cheap
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air
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travels
itself.

All in all,
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should
be encouraged
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because
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air
flight is
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now
becoming a main tendency in this
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fast
developing era, and it is undeniable that it
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makes
our life easier and more convenient with more options,
rather
than price tags.
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IELTS essay Nowadays cheap air travel is increasingly popular in the world.

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312 words
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