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Nowadays cheap air travel is increasingly popular in the world. To what extent do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays cheap air travel is increasingly popular in the world. PVrW2
Nowadays, technological and scientific breakthroughs have transformed the way of people traveling around the world. Traveling by airplane is becoming cheaper and more popular than before. Although there are some drawbacks for this trending, in my view, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, the details will be discussed in this essay by analyzing both side of this argument. Admittedly, Cheaper air tickets attract more people to select flight as their first choice of transportation for travelling in a relatively longer distance. The increasing usage of airplane would increase carbon emission. As we all know, airplanes use fossil fuels as their main source of fuel. In order to accommodate the increasing trend of air travel, more carbon dioxide is generated, which lead to global warming and is harmful to people's life on the earth. On the other hand, the increasing air travel offers people great convenience and efficiency. Firstly, the airplane is the fastest travel options in all means. The cheap flight would provide the best balance between cost and convenience. Comparing to other ways of travel such as train, flight could save a big amount of commuting time for travelers. Take Shanghai to Beijing as an example, which is about 2000km in distance, it requires more than 10 hours by train, however, the flight is as short as 3 hours only. Secondly, cheap air travel encourages people to travel to other areas or countries with different cultures. This help people not only open their mind but also learn different lifestyles. People would have a more positive attitude towards their life. In conclusion, It is true that cheap air travel causes more environmental problems, but I still believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in terms of offering much more convenience and efficiency to people.
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people
traveling around the world. Traveling by
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airplane
is becoming cheaper and more popular than
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before
. Although there are
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some
drawbacks for this trending, in my view, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, the
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details
will
be discussed
in this essay by analyzing both side of this argument.

Admittedly
, Cheaper
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air
tickets attract more
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people
to select
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flight
as their
first
choice of transportation for travelling in a
relatively
longer distance. The increasing usage of
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airplane
would increase carbon emission. As we all know,
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airplanes
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use
fossil fuels as their main source of fuel. In order to accommodate the increasing trend of
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air
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travel
, more carbon dioxide
is generated
, which lead to global warming and is harmful to
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people
's life on the earth.

On the other hand
, the increasing
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air
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travel
offers
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people
great convenience and efficiency.
Firstly
, the
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airplane
is the fastest
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travel
options in all means. The
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cheap
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flight
would provide the best balance between cost and convenience. Comparing to other ways of
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travel
such as train,
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flight
could save a
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big
amount of commuting time for travelers. Take Shanghai to Beijing as an example, which is about
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2000km
in distance, it requires more than 10 hours by train,
however
, the
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flight
is as short as 3 hours
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only
.
Secondly
,
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cheap
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air
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travel
encourages
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people
to
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travel
to other areas or countries with
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different
cultures. This
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help
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people
not
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only
open their mind
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also
learn
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different
lifestyles.
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People
would have a more
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positive
attitude towards their life.

In conclusion
, It is true that
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cheap
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air
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travel
causes more environmental problems,
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I
still
believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in terms of offering much more convenience and efficiency to
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people
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays cheap air travel is increasingly popular in the world.

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4 paragraphs
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