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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying. r81K6
It is believed that the use of printed informative sources, such as newspapers and books will become extinct due to the availability of all the information online for free. I, personally agree with the opinion that people will buy less printed books or newspapers in future, however, the traditional method of printed papers would not escape. Also, everything available online would not be for free. To begin with, although, I believe that the use of printed papers would decline because the online services these days are considered far more secure and fast than the traditional ways. The information that is stored online cannot be easily accessible by others, only the person with the exact password can have access to it. To illustrate, many government organisations and banks these days are encouraging people towards going paperless because of being secure. In spite of this secure system, many people from developing and undeveloped countries may not have access to it. As the financial condition of these countries may not allow the government to spend money to create a vast internet network. So, they would use printed papers to keep their information. This online information may not be free and people would have to pay some charges for this service. As staff is needed to maintain and update the online resources from reliable resources. If there would be no revenue in this job then nobody would come forward to work in this sector. For example, various journalists and other staff members are required to update daily news online. Hence, some of the information presents online would be charged. To conclude, I believe that the use of printed newspapers and books would decline in the near future buy it would be still in use by some. Also, some information available online would not be for free.
It
is believed
that the
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use
of
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printed
informative sources, such as newspapers and books will become extinct due to the availability of all the
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information
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online
for free. I,
personally
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agree
with the opinion that
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people
will
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buy
less
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printed
books or newspapers
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
,
however
, the traditional method of
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printed
papers would not escape.
Also
, everything available
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online
would not be for free.

To
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begin
with, although, I believe that the
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use
of
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printed
papers would decline
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because
the
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online
services these days
are considered
far more secure and
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fast
than the traditional ways. The
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information
that
is stored
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online
cannot be
easily
accessible by others,
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only
the person with the exact password can have access to it. To illustrate,
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many
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government
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisations' is British English.
organisations
and banks these days are encouraging
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people
towards going paperless
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because
of being secure.
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In spite of
this secure system,
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many
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people
from developing and undeveloped countries may not have access to it.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
the financial condition of these countries may not
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allow
the
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government
to spend money to create a vast internet network.
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So
, they would
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use
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printed
papers to
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keep
their information.

This
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online
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information
may not be free and
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people
would
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have to
pay
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some
charges for this service. As staff
is needed
to maintain and update the
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online
resources from reliable resources. If there would be no revenue in this job then nobody would
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come
forward to work in this sector.
For example
, various journalists and other staff members
are required
to update daily news
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online
.
Hence
,
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some of the
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information
presents
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online
would
be charged
.

To conclude
, I believe that the
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use
of
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printed
newspapers and books would decline in the near future
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buy
it would be
still
in
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use
by
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some
.
Also
,
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some
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information
available
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online
would not be for free.
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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