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Nowadays, celebrities often speak of things that they do not know much about. What are the good and bad sides of this trend?

Nowadays, celebrities often speak of things that they do not know much about. What are the good and bad sides of this trend? BwX1j
It is not a secret that nowadays person’s popularity is often measured by the quantity of followers. And, of course, one of the easiest way to raise this number up is posting a content connected with topics that person’s target audience are talking about. However, one of the consequences of this way is that often celebrities are not very deep into the topic and it makes them publicize some incorrect things. First of all, I think popularity is a big responsibility because often someone’s social status means that person’s fans can relate on his or her opinion. Of course, people should be more careful choosing sources of information and check facts by themselves but not all Internet users are adult or well-educated. So, to my mind, it is highly important not to give an incorrect information, especially connected with quite important topics like health, politics and social relations. Also I would like to notice that celebrities posting some radical statements are almost always highly discussed even if these statements include some incorrect points. Moreover, I am sure that sometimes well-known people create provocative posts to get their profit, for instance new followers. But talking about ethical side of this way, I suggest the only one reason why it is not absolutely bad for the most part of Internet users is the fact that even incorrect information about something draws an attention to this theme. So, sometimes this trend can be even useful and profitable for both sides. Summarizing all this information, I believe that the new reality when we cannot base our trusting people’s opinion only on their social status makes us more mindful and careful. And I am sure it is the best side of the issue.
It is not a secret that nowadays person’s popularity is
often
measured by the quantity of followers. And,
of course
, one of the easiest way to raise this number up is posting a content connected with topics that person’s target audience are talking about.
However
, one of the consequences of this way is that
often
celebrities are not
very
deep into the topic and it
makes
them publicize
some
incorrect
things.

First of all
, I
think
popularity is a
big
responsibility
because
often
someone’s social status means that person’s fans can relate on
his or her
opinion.
Of course
,
people
should be more careful choosing sources of
information
and
check
facts by themselves
but
not all Internet users are adult or well-educated.
So
, to my mind, it is
highly
important
not to give an
incorrect
information
,
especially
connected with quite
important
topics like health, politics and social relations.

Also
I would like to notice that celebrities posting
some
radical statements are almost always
highly
discussed even if these statements include
some
incorrect
points.
Moreover
, I am sure that
sometimes
well-known
people
create provocative posts to
get
their profit,
for instance
new followers.
But
talking about ethical side of this way, I suggest the
only
one reason why it is not
absolutely
bad
for the most part
of Internet users is the fact that even
incorrect
information
about something draws an attention to this theme.
So
,
sometimes
this trend can be even useful and profitable for both sides.

Summarizing all this
information
, I believe that the new reality when we cannot base our trusting
people
’s opinion
only
on their social status
makes
us more mindful and careful. And I am sure it is the best side of the issue.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, celebrities often speak of things that they do not know much about. What are the good and bad sides of this trend?

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