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Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. w2XY
As millions of people and organisations of all stripes can post information on the Internet, more people don’t deem the content they see online accurate. However, there is still credible information on the Internet, which is harder to be ferreted out. It is understandable that people desire to be focused on, especially those who want to become stars, the Internet is the most effective way to make this happen. Thus this drives many of them to spread their personal information to attract more viewers so that one day their gifts may be paid attention to. Also, for some business organisations, they usually create exaggerated advertisements to propagate their products, while actually, their products are not as perfect as the advertisements described. On the other hand, in some repressive regimes, media is closely tied to the government. Media outlets provide information not for the well-being of civilians but for the propaganda of the regime so that they can control the regime for their own interests. However, all those critics of Internet information do not mean that there is little reliable information. After all, there are people telling lies out of their personal interests, there are definitely a large group of people being against lies and keeping digging the truth, though. Therefore, the target that those authoritative organisations and individuals posting their information is, to tell the truth, and clear the clouds, which makes their information accurate and reliable. After all, in the world with diverse cultures and races, it is impossible to guarantee all information being objectively accurate. All we should do is to keep a clear head and become more efficient to sort out the accurate information from those detrimentally false so that we can stand on the impartial side.
As millions of
people
and
organisations
of all stripes can post
information
on the Internet, more
people
don’t deem the content they
see
online
accurate
.
However
, there is
still
credible
information
on the Internet, which is harder to
be ferreted
out.

It is understandable that
people
desire to
be focused
on,
especially
those who want to become stars, the Internet is the most effective way to
make
this happen.
Thus
this drives
many
of them to spread their personal
information
to attract more viewers
so
that one day their gifts may
be paid
attention to.
Also
, for
some
business
organisations
, they
usually
create exaggerated advertisements to propagate their products, while actually, their products are not as perfect as the advertisements
described
.

On the other hand
, in
some
repressive regimes, media is
closely
tied to the
government
. Media outlets provide
information
not for the well-being of civilians
but
for the propaganda of the regime
so
that they can control the regime for their
own
interests.

However
, all those critics of Internet
information
do not mean that there is
little
reliable
information
.
After all
, there are
people
telling lies out of their personal interests, there are definitely a large
group
of
people
being against lies and keeping digging the truth, though.
Therefore
, the target that those authoritative
organisations
and individuals posting their
information
is, to
tell
the truth, and
clear
the clouds, which
makes
their
information
accurate
and reliable.

After all
, in the world with diverse cultures and races, it is impossible to guarantee all
information
being
objectively
accurate
. All we should do is to
keep
a
clear
head and become more efficient to sort out the
accurate
information
from those
detrimentally
false
so
that we can stand on the impartial side.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
290 words
5.5
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