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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. maVL
Common people have no role in developing the environmental conditions, whereas it is only in the hands of the governments and huge multi national companies to transform the surroundings. I disagree to this point, as it is also the responsibility of each and every human begin to take care of their habitat and their planet. Firstly, enhancing the conditions of environment comes from the small proactive steps that each person should take at their home. Maintaining clean and green sourroundings inside and outside the home, will eventually yield a positive effect of the environmental conditions. For example, I grow plenty of planets at my home, and gift plants for any special occasions for my family and friends, which motivated my friend to do the same. Secondly, taking the initiation and cleaning your sourroudings whenever you see waste compiling in a area and disposing that waste properly will have a much bigger impact on the people in your locality. For example, my friend Sam cleaned the empty land beside his home where people used to dispose the garbage, because of which that area became a breeding ground for mosquitoes and flies. Later that he installed a sign board of not to dispose waste in this place. After this incident no one in that locality dumped their waste there and this bought a great impact on the people around him. Even though the cleaning and imposing the garbage work needs to be done by government, however, an individual like Sam came up and took the responsibility of improving the environment. To sum up, environment is made by individual not any organization, hence, it is the duty of all the people and the governments in this world to protect and develop the living conditions and environmental standards around them. Save the nature and nature will save us.
Common
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have no role in developing the environmental conditions, whereas it is
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only
in the hands of the
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governments
and huge
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multi national
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companies
to transform the surroundings. I disagree to this point, as it is
also
the responsibility of each and every human
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begin
to take care of their habitat and their planet.

Firstly
, enhancing the conditions of environment
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comes
from the
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small
proactive steps that each person should take at their home. Maintaining clean and green
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sourroundings
inside and outside the home, will
eventually
yield a
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positive
effect of the environmental conditions.
For example
, I grow
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plenty
of planets at my home, and gift plants for any special occasions for my family and friends, which motivated my friend to do the same.

Secondly
, taking the initiation and cleaning your
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sourroudings
whenever you
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see
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waste
compiling in
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a
area and disposing that
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waste
properly
will have a much bigger impact on the
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people
in your locality.
For example
, my friend Sam cleaned the empty land beside his home where
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people
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used
to dispose the garbage,
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because
of which that area became a breeding ground for mosquitoes and flies. Later that he installed a
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sign
board of not to dispose
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waste
in this place. After this incident no one in that locality dumped their
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waste
there and this
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bought
a great impact on the
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people
around him.
Even though
the cleaning and imposing the garbage work needs to
be done
by
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government
,
however
, an individual like Sam came up and took the responsibility of improving the environment.

To sum up, environment
is made
by individual not any organization,
hence
, it is the duty of all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
in this world to protect and develop the living conditions and environmental standards around them. Save the nature and nature will save us.

IELTS essay Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.

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