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Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is accurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is accurate. mRrL
In the present time, everyone has the advantage of using the internet to express one 's knowledge. Some people believe that the online information given is mostly inaccurate, however I do not completely advocate the same. This essay will discuss both views with some relevant examples. To begin with the positive aspect of internet information. As we live in a modern world where everything is advanced, so for checking any detail we need the help of technology. In other words, if someone is planning to travel any particular place around the globe but he is struggling with the problems such as location, modes of transport, cuisines, culture and accommodation of that place, internet is the only solution to such kinds of problems. In addition, many educational institutes are providing online classes for their course, by surfing the net, one is able to know thoroughly about the college, faculty, coursework and fee structure. Nevertheless, there are many fake websites that provide unreliable data for their products. For example, a survey shows the data given on the webpage of one of the famous cosmetic company found to be inauthentic, to promote the sale of their things. Moreover, People nowadays using internet to become popular and posting details about them that are not correct. To conclude, despite the fake and inaccurate references made on the various sources of online modes, one should check the authenticity of the data and the sites for surfing. We should be alert while surfing the net as it provides both fake as well as genuine contents.
In the present time, everyone has the advantage of using the internet

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to
express one

's knowledge.
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Some
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people
believe that the online information
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given
is
mostly
inaccurate,

however


I do not completely advocate the same. This

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essay
will discuss both views with
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some
relevant examples.

To
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begin


with the
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positive
aspect of internet

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information
. As we
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live
in a modern world where everything
is advanced
,
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so
for checking any detail we need the
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help
of technology.
In other words
, if someone is planning to travel any particular place around the globe
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but
he is struggling with the problems
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such


as location, modes of transport, cuisines, culture and accommodation of that place,

internet

is the
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only
solution to such

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kinds
of problems.
In addition
,
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many
educational institutes are providing online classes for their course, by surfing the net,
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one


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is
able to know
thoroughly
about the college, faculty, coursework and fee structure.

Nevertheless
, there are
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many
fake websites that provide unreliable data for their products.
For example
, a survey
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shows
the data
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given
on the
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webpage
of
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one


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of
the
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famous
cosmetic
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company
found to be inauthentic, to promote the sale of their things.
Moreover
,
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People
nowadays using

internet

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to
become popular and posting
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details
about them that are not correct.

To conclude
, despite the fake and inaccurate references made on the various sources of online modes, one

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should
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check
the authenticity of the data and the sites for surfing. We should be alert while surfing the net as it provides both fake
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as well as
genuine contents.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is accurate.

Essay
  American English
19 paragraphs
258 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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