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Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate.

Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. 7w03
Internet revolution made drastic changes in the people’s life and it became encylopedia of the information. I completely agree as there is no restriction upon sharing information over the internet that cause sharing of false information spread among the people. Internet brings out desire of people to speak and convey their message to the public, and to create controversy most of them share wrong information to became a star. On the other hand the person who is reading that information may think that information is correct which generate a lot of question in their mind and that results as negative impact on the society. Other though process about that every information which is available on the internet is not false there as some reliable source from where we can read the correct information. Nowadays media also came to the internet and sources like e-newspaper and videos publish by them are seems to be reliable. So it is up to the person who is reading the information may require to cross check it with some reliable sources to clear the clouds. After all the world full of diverse culture, and the mentality of the people couldn’t be changed to create controversies. So we should keep our head clean and become more efficient to sort out the accurate information so that way we can stand neutral.
Internet revolution made drastic
changes
in the
people
’s life and it became
encylopedia
of the
information
. I completely
agree
as there is no restriction upon sharing
information
over the internet that cause sharing of false
information
spread among the
people
.

Internet brings out desire of
people
to speak and convey their message to the public, and to create controversy most of them share
wrong
information
to became
a star.
On the other hand
the person who is reading that
information
may
think
that
information
is correct which generate
a lot of
question in their mind and that results as
negative
impact on the society.

Other though process about that every
information
which is available on the internet is not false there as
some
reliable source from where we can read the correct
information
. Nowadays media
also
came to the internet and sources like e-newspaper and videos publish by them are seems to be reliable.

So
it is up to the person who is reading the
information
may require to cross
check
it with
some
reliable sources to
clear
the clouds.
After all
the world full of diverse culture, and the mentality of the
people
couldn’t be
changed
to create controversies.
So
we should
keep
our head clean and become more efficient to sort out the accurate
information
so
that way we can stand neutral.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate.

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