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Now with the help of genetic engineering parents can choose the gender and physical characteristics of child whatever they want and what are the advantages and disadvantages of this development

Now with the help of genetic engineering parents can choose the gender and physical characteristics of child whatever they want and what are the advantages and disadvantages of this development VB0a3
Scientists have made a major discovery in genetic engineering. They can now alter the genes of any living beings and design a perfect human beings. I believe, this scientific development brings both positive and negative impacts which would be discussed below On the one side, this advancement in science effectively fulfils the desires of parents to have baby with specific treats. Each parents think about the baby but all are do not capable for this and sometimes they hurt badly while, now those parents fill their own wishes through the genetic engineering. Because due to this genes transfer one to another mother at last conceive the baby. Secondly, this scientific step towards development contributes to curb population too. Most of the people want to a baby boy erratically this is not happen in reality but they continuously try and born girl child as a result of this, population is growing day by day. However, due to the genetic engineering takes a genes of baby boy and inject to the mother. The flip side of the coin, it is an unnatural process which is not anymore justify in most of the society. First of all, every one does not give the preference to this because sometimes some culture as well as traditions does not allow to these types of methods. Second of all, cloning with genetic engineering is too expensive. It can not be affordable by everyone especially poor people. In conclusion, there are many fruitful uses of genetic engineering however, it can not be neglected the some loopholes of this technique.
Scientists have made a major discovery in
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. They can
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alter the genes of any living beings and design a perfect human
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. I believe, this scientific development brings both
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On the one side, this advancement in science
effectively
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fulfils
the desires of parents to have baby with specific treats.
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Each
parents
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about the baby
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all are
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not capable for this and
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sometimes
they hurt
badly
while,
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those parents fill their
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wishes through the
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genetic
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engineering
.
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due to this genes transfer one to another mother at last conceive the baby.
Secondly
, this scientific step towards development contributes to curb population too. Most of the
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people
want to a baby boy
erratically
this is not
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happen
in reality
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they
continuously
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try and
born girl child
as a result
of this, population is growing day by day.
However
, due to the
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takes a genes of baby boy and inject to the mother.

The flip side of the coin, it is an unnatural process which is not
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justify in most of the society.
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to these types of methods. Second of all, cloning with
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engineering
is too expensive. It can not be affordable by everyone
especially
poor
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people
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fruitful
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IELTS essay Now with the help of genetic engineering parents can choose the gender and physical characteristics of child whatever they want and what are the advantages and disadvantages of this development

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