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Networking is a natural thing in our life as it happens in most of the cases automatically during our daily life.

Networking is a natural thing in our life as it happens in most of the cases automatically during our daily life. xmPYg

Networking is a natural thing in our life as it happens in most of the cases automatically during our daily life. Therefore for me meeting new people is imperative in order to develop as a successful individual. It is believed that human beings are tend to change as they grow up. In certain period of time old friends’ prefences or goals will not coincide and everyone goes to different directions following their aims. From my personal experience to be honest I had only one real friend and he is still my friend. We used to go out together like to the partys or to the special events. So we did not planned our weekend without discussing how to enjoy it. And at the moment we live in different countries and communicate rarely. As a normal and social person obviously I have to make new friends. As far as I am concerned people have to stick to their goals not to the friends. Of course it does not mean that we should cut our relationships with old fellows completely but at the same time we do not have to strive to adjust our aims just to be together with them. During our life we study then we start and continue our professional experience in different locations and naturally we meet new people likely with some of them we share the same interests, goals so we begin to be in friendship. It is vital and natural process in society which plays crucial role for the growth of a person in every aspect of life. To sum up I believe that making new friends is important for everyone.

Networking is a natural thing in our life as it happens in most of the cases automatically
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Therefore
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people
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is
 imperative in order to develop as a successful individual.

It is believed
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tend
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
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old
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friends’
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prefences
 or goals will not coincide and everyone goes to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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only
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friend and
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friend
. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to go out together like to the Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "parties", the plural form of the noun 'party'?partiespartyparts
partys
 or to the special This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
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planned
 our weekend without discussing how to enjoy it. And at the moment we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
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different
 countries and communicate rarely. As a normal and social person obviously
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 friends.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 far as I am concerned
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 stick to their goals not to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
. Of The comma is probably missing here: "course, it".course, it
course it
 does not mean that we should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 our relationships with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 fellows completely This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 at the same time we do not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 strive to adjust our aims This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 to be together with them. During our life we study then we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 and continue our professional experience in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 locations and naturally
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 likely with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them we share the same interests, goals This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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begin
 to be in friendship. It is vital and natural process in society which plays crucial role for the growth of a person in every aspect of life.

To sum up I believe that making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for everyone. 