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Now many televised talent shows are trendy in the world. These shows are a good method of finding talented people,but in my view sometimes it can be the worst because they do some dramatic to make it more interested.

Now many televised talent shows are trendy in the world. These shows are a good method of finding talented people, but in my view sometimes it can be the worst because they do some dramatic to make it more interested. G3eXL
If you want to show your talent, you can challenge yourself with these shows, such as if you are good in singing or you can follow the voice, got talent shows, etc. It will help you to be confident, comfortable, how to be a domineer on the stage. There arr a coachee who help you to develop your talent. However, the rates for these shows is important too. Although some talented people try hard for showing the best of them but them shows do not demostrate a performing and they add some dramatic. For them it is make more attention from people for watching these shows. In order the rates of these shows became lower. Overall, i think a lot of televised talent show has a positive and negative side. If you want to upragade your skill, you can follow or watching it, but you should be wise for what see or follow in station televised shows.
If you want to
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show
your talent, you can challenge yourself with these
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shows
, such as if you are
The usual preposition for this expression is "at". Did you mean, "good at singing"?
good in singing
or you can follow the voice,
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got
talent
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shows
, etc. It will
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help
you to be confident, comfortable, how to be
After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'domineer' is correct. If 'domineer' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a domineer
on the stage. There arr a
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coachee
who
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help
you to develop your talent.

However
, the rates for these
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shows
is
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important
too. Although
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some
talented
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people
try
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hard
for showing the best of them
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but
them
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shows
do not
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demostrate
a
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performing and
they
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add
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some
dramatic. For them it is
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make
more attention from
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people
for watching these
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shows
. In order the rates of these
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shows
became lower.

Overall
,
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i
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think
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a lot of
televised talent
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show
has a
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positive
and
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negative
side. If you want to
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upragade
your
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skill
, you can follow or watching it,
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but
you should be wise for what
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see
or follow in station televised
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shows
.
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IELTS essay Now many televised talent shows are trendy in the world. These shows are a good method of finding talented people, but in my view sometimes it can be the worst because they do some dramatic to make it more interested.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
157 words
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