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Now days, the people have two options; watching the movies on smart devices and/or going tp theater screens. I believe it depends on the people which option suits their need well. Let's discuss both of them here before coming to any conclusion.

Now days, the people have two options; watching the movies on smart devices and/or going tp theater screens. I believe it depends on the people which option suits their need well. Let's KwlbM
The mobile phone technology is growing at very fast rate, because of this; it's possible to explore high-end media on the smart-phones. Most people find it very easy and comfortable to watch their desired movies on their palm! Besides that, some applications on smart phone give wide range of selection with high definition content. For example, the Netflix, a popular online streaming software, has countless movies of different genre. Top of that, those movies and series can be downloadable, it means, we can watch them later when we actually want. There are people, however, who never like watching their favorite movies on phones. They believe that unmatched Dolby digital-sound and a cinematography could not be possible on mobile phones. I also don't like it on smart phone when a five start rated movie has been released in the theater. The action scenes usually make me amazed when they are shown on 3D-Screen. In particular, the Lion-king, an animated cartoon movie, gets released on last Friday. Most people gave more than four star rating after watching it in the cinema, in 3D format. By this I meant that; our perspective about the movies could be changed, when we see them on the big screens. In conclusion, I think people like watching movies on both the formats. Both of them have their very unique advantages over each other. The former one offers easy access and comfort while the later one gives us best ambience. I personally believe both have equal opportunity.
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media on the smart-phones. Most
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people
find it
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very
easy and comfortable to
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watch
their desired
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movies
on their palm!
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that,
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some
applications on smart
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phone
give wide range of selection with high definition content.
For example
, the Netflix, a popular online streaming software, has countless
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movies
of
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different
genre. Top of that, those
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movies
and series can be downloadable, it means, we can
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watch
them later when we actually want.

There are
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people
,
however
, who never like watching their favorite
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movies
on
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phones
. They believe that unmatched Dolby digital-sound and a cinematography could not be possible on mobile
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phones
. I
also
don't like it on smart
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phone
when a five
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rated
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has
been released
in the theater. The action scenes
usually
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make
me amazed when they
are shown
on 3D-Screen.
In particular
, the Lion-king, an animated cartoon
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movie
,
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gets
released on last Friday. Most
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people
gave more than
'four star' is missing a hyphen.
four star
rating after watching it in the cinema, in 3D format. By this I meant that; our perspective about the
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movies
could be
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changed
, when we
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see
them on the
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big
screens.

In conclusion
, I
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think
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people
like watching
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movies
on both the formats. Both of them have their
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very unique
advantages over each other. The former one offers easy access and comfort while the later one gives
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us best
ambience. I
personally
believe both have equal opportunity.

IELTS essay Now days, the people have two options; watching the movies on smart devices and/or going tp theater screens. I believe it depends on the people which option suits their need well. Let's

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