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Now a days, many people communicate using social media. do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Now a days, many people communicate using social media. do you think this is a positive or negative development? KwVWR
The importance of social media which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The just any substantial influence off this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion in this modern era technology is progressing add and explanation space. This essay will further elaborate my view for favoring the positive impact off social media which leads to a logical conclusion analyzing the statement and explaining further the first and foremost reason behind this is that undoubtedly social networking is very convenient and time saving. By this I mean that in todays world where everyone is so busy in his own work social network makes there life easier and comfortable. For instance in office work you can simply communicate or arrange meeting using application. Another striking benefit is this regard is that it helps people to socialize themselves. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reason steams from the fact is that unlike other communicating devices, networking is economical friendly so it is more productive and less costly. Moreover, it is easy to access so any one can use it. Apart from the reasons mentioned above it can be clearly stated why many are in favour of this trend In conclusion I would like to say that social media plays a vital role in todays world.
The importance of
social
media which was always debatable has
now
become more controversial with
many
people
claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The
just
any substantial influence off this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion in this modern era technology is progressing
add
and explanation space. This essay will
further
elaborate my view for favoring the
positive
impact off
social
media which leads to a logical
conclusion


analyzing
the statement and explaining
further
the
first
and foremost reason behind this is that
undoubtedly
social
networking is
very
convenient and time saving. By this I mean that in
todays
world where everyone is
so
busy in his
own
work
social
network
makes
there life easier and comfortable.
For instance
in office work you can
simply
communicate or arrange meeting using application. Another striking benefit is this regard is that it
helps
people
to socialize themselves.

Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reason steams from the fact is that unlike other communicating devices, networking is economical friendly
so
it is more productive and less costly.
Moreover
, it is easy to access
so
any one
can
use
it. Apart from the reasons mentioned above it can be
clearly
stated why
many
are in
favour
of this trend

In conclusion
I would like to say that
social
media plays a vital role in
todays
world.
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IELTS essay Now a days, many people communicate using social media. do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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