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Now a days communication via internet is more perfect dou you agree or disagree

Now a days communication via internet is more perfect dou you agree or disagree xxbqo
Today communication through social media is convenient thus, I agree with this and I will put my solid point on this. First and foremost, internet is consider a most powerful tool to communicate with friends and family. for instance, we stay in contact with friends and family and we can check their whatsapp status and Facebook stories and send him greets. Moreover we can say that it is become very easy for the people to call friends and family any time and in any circumstances. however with the single
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communication through social media is convenient
thus
, I
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agree
with this and I will put my solid point on this.
First
and foremost, internet is
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consider
a most powerful tool to communicate with friends and family.
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for
instance, we stay in contact with friends and
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family and
we can
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check
their
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whatsapp
status and Facebook stories and
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send
him greets.
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Moreover
we can say that it
is become
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very
easy for the
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people
to call friends and family any time and in any circumstances.
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however
with the
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single
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IELTS essay Now a days communication via internet is more perfect dou you agree or disagree

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  American English
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88 words
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