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not everything that is learned contained in books

not everything that is learned contained in books g500A
It is really important aspect of our life - learning knowlenge. Generally people are learning from books forgetting about experience. The majorite of people think that knowlenge from books is more important than from experience. I completely diagree with this statement and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples. First of all, experience that we are getting from our life cannot be appreciated with books. Our experience gives us option to choose based on our past mistakes. For
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IELTS essay not everything that is learned contained in books

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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