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Not enough students around the world choose to study science subjects at university. What are the reason for this? What impact dose this issue have on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The decrease in the number of people around the globe who choose to learn science disciplines at university are becoming a significant issue. This essay will address the main causes of this situation as well as the effects it have on our society. One of the main reasons for this situation is the lack of attractiveness in studying science-related disciplines due to its complicated nature. For example, studying Maths requires students to learn by heart all the formulas and rules which can be quite a difficult for people who do not have good memory. In addition, this heavy discipline involves many problems that are needed to be solved not only by remembering the formulas but also by being able to apply it correctly to complete the given tasks. In other words, students choosing this sort of subjects will have to frequently brainstorm. Therefore, it is less appeal for those who are more of a creative person. In addition, due to these difficulties, students who choose science subjects tend to have low mark, and no one wants that to appear in their CV afterwards. As a result, this situation leads to certain problems for our society. First and foremost, less students choose science-related means means fewer human resources for science-related occupation. For instance, the reduction in the amount or people choose to learn Maths, Physics and Biology which are the basic subjects of Medicine and Pharmacy will result in the shortage of graduated doctors. For this reason, there will not adequate doctors to meet the demand of society in taking care of their health. Second, fewer science-related students means more in the field of creation-related disciplines, result it the redundant supply for the need of society. For example, the increasing number of painters leads to the rise of artworks in the market, outweighing the demands of society, resulting in the reduction of its price and waste of resources. In conclusion, the facts that the decreasing number of people choose to study science disciplines are having significant effects on our society.
The decrease in the number of
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around the globe
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choose
to learn science
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disciplines
at university are becoming a significant issue. This essay will address the main causes of this situation
as well
as the effects it
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have
on our society.

One of the main reasons for this situation is the lack of attractiveness in studying science-related
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disciplines
due to its complicated nature.
For example
, studying
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Maths
requires
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students
to learn by heart all the formulas and
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rules
which can be quite a difficult for
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people
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who
do not have
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good
memory.
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discipline
involves
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many
problems that
are needed
to
be solved
not
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only
by remembering the formulas
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but
also
by being able to apply it
correctly
to complete the
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given
tasks.
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,
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students
choosing this sort of subjects will
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have to
frequently
brainstorm.
Therefore
, it is less appeal for those
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who
are more of a creative person.
In addition
, due to these difficulties,
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students
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who
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choose
science subjects tend to have low mark, and no one wants that to appear in their CV afterwards.

As a result
, this situation leads to certain problems for our
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society
.
First
and foremost,
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less
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students
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choose
science-related
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means means
fewer human resources for science-related occupation.
For instance
, the reduction in the amount or
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people
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choose
to learn
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Maths
, Physics and Biology which are the basic subjects of Medicine and Pharmacy will result in the shortage of graduated doctors.
For this reason
, there will not adequate doctors to
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meet
the demand of
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society
in taking care of their health. Second, fewer science-related
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students
means more in the field of creation-related
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disciplines
, result it the redundant supply for the need of
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society
.
For example
, the increasing number of painters leads to the rise of artworks in the market, outweighing the demands of
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society
, resulting in the reduction of its price and waste of resources.

In conclusion
, the facts that the decreasing number of
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people
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choose
to study science
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disciplines
are having significant effects on our
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society
.
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IELTS essay Not enough students around the world choose to study science subjects at university. What are the reason for this? What impact dose this issue have on society?

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