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Newspapers have influenced people's ideas and opinions reasons? Is this postive or negative situation?

Newspapers and magazines are the source of information for the world. Its often argued that newspapers play vital role in individual's thinking and making correct options. This essay will discuss about both positive and negative impacts of newspaper on people's ideas and opinions. First of all, newspapers are source of updated information and current scenario. Business section provide daily updates upon the rate of stocks and businessmen first go through it before investing in any stocks. For an instance, new players in stock markets, if couldn't have proper knowledge of profitable stock's its chances to get a huge loss by investing into wrong firm. On the other side, advertisements in newspapers will attracts its customers and mainly people's should buy a without looking into their pocket. For example, In advertisement there are offer of Rs 50000 benefits on new honda car and individuals get attracted and brought a car infact there is no need of it. To conclude, newspapers have much impact on people's mind however its postive influence outweigh the negative influence.
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play vital role in individual's thinking and making correct options. This essay will
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impacts of
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are source of updated information and
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current
scenario. Business section provide daily updates upon the rate of stocks and businessmen
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go through it
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before
investing in any stocks. For an instance, new players in stock markets, if couldn't have proper knowledge of profitable stock's its chances to
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get
a huge loss by investing into
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wrong
firm. On the other side, advertisements in
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newspapers
will attracts its customers and
mainly
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people
's should
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buy
a without looking into their pocket.
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, In advertisement there are
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of Rs 50000 benefits on new
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honda
car and individuals
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attracted and brought a car
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there is no need of it.
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have much impact on
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people
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influence outweigh the
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IELTS essay Newspapers have influenced people's ideas and opinions reasons? Is this postive or negative situation?

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  American English
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