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News stories on TV and news papers are very often acompanied by pictures, some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this. v.2

News stories on TV and news papers are very often acompanied by pictures, some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this. v. 2
Images have become an integral part of the news on TV or in newspapers. Some people believe that adding the photographs relevant to the news will be more effective than the theoretical story. I completely agree with this phenomenon, in this fast-paced world; people only skim through the headlines and pictures which makes the news easier to comprehend. I will support my stance with valid arguments and examples. Media is a highly competitive market and the journalist makes a lot of efforts to make their news interesting and attractive for the audience. It is quite evident that news with images grabs more attention. As through viewing pictures, the reader can quickly identify if the news is important to read further or not. To elucidate the point here, pictures make the news more appealing and attracting. For instance, I am a big fan of a political leader Imran Khan. If I see his picture in any newspaper, I make sure to read the whole story to stay updated about him. There is a probability of skipping the whole news if it' s only mentioned in words. Furthermore, through picture illustrations, media grabs the attention of all the age groups. For example, there is a separate session every Sunday magazine for kids. My daughter loves reading different stories and viewing beautiful cartoon pictures from the magazine and does not leave any page unread. That is primarily because of the appealing tactics of media that enforce the reader to read every part. If there is an incident reported at TV without the images, people will listen to the story with less interest. Whereas, if the same incident is shown with certain images, people will be eager to see more pictures to build an image in their mind. To summarize, photography plays a pivotal role in any news success be it on Television or in the newspaper. Physiologically, people tend to view news with pictures as these images help them build their imaginations around the story more conveniently.
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Images
have become an integral part of the
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news
on TV or in newspapers.
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Some
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people
believe that adding the photographs relevant to the
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news
will be more effective than the theoretical
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story
. I completely
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agree
with this phenomenon, in this
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fast
-paced world;
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people
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only
skim through the headlines and
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pictures
which
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makes
the
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news
easier to comprehend. I will support my stance with valid arguments and examples.

Media is a
highly
competitive market and the journalist
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makes
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a lot of
efforts to
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make
their
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news
interesting and attractive for the audience. It is quite evident that
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news
with
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images
grabs more attention. As through viewing
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pictures
, the reader can
quickly
identify if the
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news
is
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important
to read
further
or not. To elucidate the point here,
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pictures
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make
the
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news
more appealing and attracting.
For instance
, I am a
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big
fan of a political leader
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Imran
Khan. If I
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see
his
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picture
in any newspaper, I
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make
sure to read the whole
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story
to stay updated about him. There is a probability of skipping the whole
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news
if
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it&
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only
mentioned in words.

Furthermore
, through
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picture
illustrations, media grabs the attention of all the age groups.
For example
, there is a separate session every Sunday magazine for kids. My daughter
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loves
reading
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different
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stories
and viewing
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beautiful
cartoon
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pictures
from the magazine and does not
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leave
any page unread.
That is
primarily
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because
of the appealing tactics of media that enforce the reader to read every part. If there is an incident reported at TV without the
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images
,
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people
will listen to the
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story
with less interest. Whereas, if the same incident
is shown
with certain
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images
,
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people
will be eager to
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see
more
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pictures
to build an
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image
in their mind.

To summarize
, photography plays a pivotal role in any
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news
success be it on Television or in the newspaper.
Physiologically
,
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people
tend to view
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news
with
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pictures
as these
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images
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help
them build their imaginations around the
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story
more
conveniently
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay News stories on TV and news papers are very often acompanied by pictures, some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
334 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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