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News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead? O8G3
Nowadays Most Prominent Way of Getting Updates For Each And Every Thing Happening In the World is Through News. News Is considered Very Significant And Appropriate Way Of Learning. But Sometime News Show Some bad News Although Some Good News Meanwhile. But I believe That News Should Be show Either It is Good Or bad. News is Most Precious To People Because It Enhance People Knowledge and Stay Updated through Current update. Some business are Totally Depend on news. Students Seek Knowledge From News And Became Aware Towards Their Goals For Instance People Preparing For Civil Services Exam Need Regular Information of Current Affairs or Numerous Others Thing. News Creator Often More Curious About Bad news Because People provide More Attention Towards Bad News. However Some Time Bad News Are Way Of Thinking about Life And Changing It. For Instance, Report OF Rape May Viral In Fastest Way And It Should Be. Some People Believe That report Writer Should Only Focus Mainly On Good News Alternatively Bad News. But I believe That They Should Provide equal Importance To each News And Try To Show Enormous News Related To Improving And Thing Causes Harm To It. In Conclusion News Are Most Efficient Way to Aware People And Record Feedback. But News Should Not Do Any Discrimination In regard To Religion Or Another Factor And Give Updates As Per Best of His Knowledge
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IELTS essay News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
230 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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