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News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?

News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative? oGrV
News keep us on the timeline of today’s contemporary world. News media has significance in our society but at some point, it becomes drawbacks to society. However, News media has both pros and cons which generally influenced in a reprehensible manner to society. First of all, News media gives us the worldwide news as well as their perception related to the current hot topics and It gives tinniest to the biggest news to us and let us know what is happening in the world. It works in a hasten way. For Instance, yesterday something had drastic happened, the next morning, we are reading that news. So far as it gives us information the next morning. several channels have been broadcasted of news on the tv in which some of them are influenced exquisitely and some are in bad ways. To exemplify, on some news channels, if some bomb blast incident happened, then they are displaying how that bomb has been made. Consequently, it’ll affect the citizens. The public might fall in the wrong direction. Even though, they broadcast crimes like robbery, bomb blast, etc. In some instance, they are motivating criminals in my views. To sum up, the government shall make a law about the bad and good news criteria channels. They ought to distinguish it and citizens get an opt whatever they like to watch.
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News
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keep
us on the timeline of
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today
’s contemporary world.
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News
media has significance in our society
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but
at
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some
point, it becomes drawbacks to society.
However
,
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News
media has both pros and cons which
generally
influenced
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in a reprehensible manner
to society.

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First of all
,
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News
media gives us the worldwide
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news
as well
as their perception related to the
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current
hot topics and It gives tinniest to the biggest
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news
to us and
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let
us know what is happening in the world. It works in
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a hasten
way.
For Instance
, yesterday something had drastic happened, the
next
morning, we are reading that
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news
.
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So
far as it gives us information the
next
morning.

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several
channels have
been broadcasted
of
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news
on the
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tv
in which
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some
of them
are influenced
exquisitely
and
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some
are in
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bad
ways. To exemplify, on
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some
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news
channels, if
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some
bomb blast incident happened, then they are displaying how that bomb has
been made
.
Consequently
, it’ll affect the citizens. The public might fall in the
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wrong
direction.
Even though
, they broadcast crimes like robbery, bomb blast, etc. In
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some
instance, they are motivating criminals in my views.

To sum up, the
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government
shall
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make
a law about the
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bad
and
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good
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news
criteria channels. They ought to distinguish it and citizens
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get
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an opt
whatever they like to
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watch
.
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IELTS essay News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?

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226 words
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