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new technologies and law, the big impact about how law is applicated.

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New technologies could be an important thing to law in general, This technologies can have a big impact about how law is applicated, it´s important to highligth that people trust more in technologiez than in real people due to its more fair and efective. To continue the above, Law can attain its objectives with IA help. People could think that this techonologiez can beat the human someday, but this thoughs are not real. If the society relly want to improve must implement this type of artificial tech.
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IELTS essay new technologies and law, the big impact about how law is applicated.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
87 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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