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Describe your hometown where you live?

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Well, today I would like to talk about my hometown. Initially, my hometown is one of the developed and modernized country among other countries. My hometown is located in the Central Asia and it is named Tashkent which is the capital of Uzbekistan. It is well known around the world for its unprecedented history as well as great people. Furthermore, nowadays my hometown has been modernized very dramatically and this changes had a positive affected to get a job. Moreover, every individual are working where they feel good. It should be highlighted that if I talk about climate. In first place I want to say that our climate is sharply continental. You know, it is like one day rainy next day will be sunny day. Another notable thing is that, climate will be perfect in Spring than other seasons. Imagine, all trees will bloomed and climate will be gentle wind with sunshine you couldn't find this weather in the world To conclude, if I continue my speech still there are a lot of distinctive facts about my hometown
Well,
today
I would like to talk about my
hometown
.
Initially
, my
hometown
is one of the developed and modernized country among other countries. My
hometown
is located
in the Central Asia and it
is named
Tashkent which is the capital of Uzbekistan. It is well known around the world for its unprecedented history
as well
as great
people
.

Furthermore
, nowadays my
hometown
has
been modernized
very
dramatically
and this
changes
had a
positive
affected
to
get
a job.
Moreover
, every individual are working where they feel
good
.

It should
be highlighted
that if I talk about
climate
. In
first
place I want to say that our
climate
is
sharply
continental. You know, it is like one day rainy
next
day will be sunny day. Another notable thing is that,
climate
will be perfect in Spring than other seasons. Imagine, all trees will bloomed and
climate
will be gentle wind with sunshine you couldn't find this weather in the world

To conclude
, if I continue my speech
still
there are
a lot of
distinctive facts about my
hometown
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IELTS essay Describe your hometown where you live?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
177 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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