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Nature’s Most Violent Wind

Nature’s Most Violent Wind 53XVA
Tornados have been observed in every continent on the planet with the exception of Antarctica. Hurricanes differ from tornadoes, in that the former develop in warm, tropical oceans whereas tornados develop on land and are more aggressive and potentially destructive. The majority of tornados are initiated by thunderstorms. Tornados are relatively common occurrences at differing magnitudes throughout the world. The geographical features of the U. S. A. lend themselves to high incidence of tornado activity. In that country the highest proportion of tornados occur in the southern states in spring from March to May and in the northern states from late spring extending into summer. Generally tornados travel from southwest to northeast, though neither time of year nor direction they will take is completely predictable.
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Tornados
have
been observed
in every continent on the planet
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with the exception of


Antarctica. Hurricanes differ from
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tornadoes
, in that the former develop in warm,
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tropical


oceans whereas
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tornados
develop on land and are more aggressive and
potentially


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destructive
. The majority of
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tornados
are initiated
by thunderstorms.
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Tornados
are
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relatively


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common
occurrences at differing magnitudes throughout the world. The
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geographical


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features
of the U. S. A. lend themselves to high incidence of
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tornado
activity. In that
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country


the highest proportion of
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tornados
occur in the southern states in spring from March to May

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and
in the northern states from late spring extending into summer.
Generally
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tornados
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travel


from southwest to northeast, though neither time of year nor direction they will take is

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completely
predictable.
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IELTS essay Nature’s Most Violent Wind

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
125 words
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