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Nations all over the world have been facing significant challenges. What major problems is your country facing? How can these problems be overcome?

Nations all over the world have been facing significant challenges. What major problems is your country facing? How can these problems be overcome? jDlN1

The world is changing at a rapid pace, and many of these changes make it a lot more difficult place for us to live. The environment, overpopulation, and war are some of the most pressing issues confronting countries throughout the world. The largest challenge that Vietnam, my birthplace, will face in the next few years will probably be environmental issues, specifically air pollution. This essay will analyze the problem and provide some potential solutions. To begin with, air pollution has been a major concern in recent years, and it has risen to the top of the Vietnamese government's priority list. It is especially common in urban areas with a high amount of vehicles. The smoke emitted by motorcycles, trucks is reducing the amount of fresh air in the city. As a result, dust levels have skyrocketed. Our nation has a high dust rate, especially on cold days or when the air is dry. There was a period of heavy fog in Vietnam, but it turned out to be an alarming sign that the air was polluted. The dust has had a substantial impact on human health, causing illnesses and even lung cancer. There are numerous ways that may be taken to alleviate this difficulty. Public transportation and environmentally friendly vehicles should be promoted, and motorbike prices should be raised to dissuade individuals from riding them on a regular basis. Vietnamese government should also impose a new stringent law on persons who harm the environment. Moreover, citizens should be given health-care advice, such as wearing masks on a regular basis, gargling with salt water after being exposed to vehicle exhaust fumes. Aside from that, the most crucial factor is still public awareness. To conclude, the biggest challenge for Vietnam is to deal with environmental issue, particularly in this essay is air pollution. The government, local administration and citizens should contribute together to eliminating this problem.

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