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My special morning with my friend

My special morning with my friend ka0K

Today, I walkup at 5: 55 am because me and my best friend Rutvik making a video for a radio campaign and today is the last day for shooting. hence, I woke up and brushed my teeth and now I am ready for running because I have to go to a garden, where we will meet and then we go to a shooting place which is not too far from my home, the shooting place is a extremely beautiful place it's called a riverfront it's not very well-known and no one knows about this place. We make a plan for shooting how we shoot and which angle is perfect for video what we normally do, and then we made a video of not every part but some of, we enjoy a view of sunrise the shadow of the sun was falling on the river and small boats are passing in a river this is looking so good, and then we played cricket for about 20 minutes, andthen we went home at 8: 30 am. I'mremarkablygrateful to spend my morning at the riverfront.

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