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My opinion about the manufacturing instant noodles

My opinion about the manufacturing instant noodles MMgXo

This figure shows the process of making instant noodles. I was surprised at the amount of the process. At the same time, I thought if the manufacture use many machine for make instant noodles, consumption energy will very much. I think it gives bad impact for environment. These days global warming is getting worse and using much energy is one of the cause. This is because I have a suggestion. I think it will be able to do for this instant noodle company. It is using a machine of all good and reduce the process

This figure This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the process of making instant noodles.

I was surprised
 at the amount of the process. At the same time, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 if the manufacture This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
Possible agreement error. The noun machine seems to be countable; consider using: "many machines".many machines
many machine
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 instant noodles, consumption energy will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it gives This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 impact for environment. These days global warming is getting worse and using much energy is one of the cause. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I have a suggestion. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it will be able to do for this instant noodle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. It is using a machine of all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
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process