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How instant noodles are made ?

How instant noodles are made ? GMKAg
To make instant noodles, they almost don't need people. After they mix flour, water, and oil, all process is continued on a conveyor. So, they can cut labor costs and provide good noodles at a low price. During the process of making instant noodles, a lot of oil are used. You should not eat instant noodles too much. Eating too much instant noodles may cause some illness, such as a lifestyle-elated disease and high blood pressure and so on.
To
make
instant
noodles
, they almost don't need
people
. After they mix flour, water, and oil, all process
is continued
on a conveyor.
So
, they can
cut
labor costs and provide
good
noodles
at a low price.

During the process of making instant
noodles
,
a lot of
oil are
used
. You should not eat instant
noodles
too much. Eating too much instant
noodles
may cause
some
illness, such as a lifestyle-elated disease and high blood pressure and
so
on.
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IELTS essay How instant noodles are made ?

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