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How instant noodles are made ?

How instant noodles are made ? GMKAg

To make instant noodles, they almost don't need people. After they mix flour, water, and oil, all process is continued on a conveyor. So, they can cut labor costs and provide good noodles at a low price. During the process of making instant noodles, a lot of oil are used. You should not eat instant noodles too much. Eating too much instant noodles may cause some illness, such as a lifestyle-elated disease and high blood pressure and so on.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
, they almost don't need Did you mean "to people"?to people
people
. After they mix flour, water, and oil, all process is continued
 on a conveyor. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 labor costs and provide This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 at a low price.

During the process of making instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 oil are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
. You should not eat instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 too much. Eating too much instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 may cause This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 illness, such as a lifestyle-elated disease and high blood pressure and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. 