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Manifucturing Instant noodles

Manifucturing Instant noodles KwmAN

Instant noodles are manufactured in the factory by various ways. 　I want to mention that I think a way interesting. Especially, the way that noodles are dried is the original creating way. We do not dry some ingredients when we cook some noodles. However, to create instant noodles has a way to dry noodles. I think that drying noodles is the way to get possibility that we can eat it despite we spend long time when we do not eat. In addition, labeling and sealing is the original way to create meals. I think it is not good for environment. Some countries have a lot of problems about garbage. Too much labeling and sealing with plastic is one of the problems. So we should consider about the solution. To reduce the amount of plastic will be a grate solution. In conclusions, manufacturing instant noodles have both of a good point and not good point.

Instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are manufactured
 in the factory by various ways. 　I want to mention that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 a way interesting. Especially
, the way that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are dried
 is the original creating way.

We do not dry This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 ingredients when we cook This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
. However
, to create instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 has a way to dry You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that drying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 is the way to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 possibility that we can eat it despite we spend long time when we do not eat.

In addition
, labeling and sealing is the original way to create meals. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for environment. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 countries have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 problems about garbage. Too much labeling and sealing with plastic is one of the problems. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 we should Did you mean simply "consider the"? You do not need the word "about" here.consider the
consider about the
 solution. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the amount of plastic will be a grate solution.

In conclusions, manufacturing instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 have both of a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 point and not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 point. 