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My Introduction on my Studies

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My name is Mansuri Moinashraf Mohammad Salam. I am living in Khambhat. Which is famous for different types of festivals such as Diwali; Uttarayan; Eid-ul-fitr; and New year and one of the most historical place in overall district. I have recently completed my Bachelor of Pharmacy which is affiliated with Gujarat Technological University. I am doing my IELTS at success overseas which is situated in Vidhyanagar and it is most famous academy in my Vidhyanagar.
My name is
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Mansuri
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Moinashraf
Mohammad
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Salam
. I am living in
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Khambhat
. Which is
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famous
for
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different
types of festivals such as Diwali;
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Uttarayan
;
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Eid-ul-fitr
; and New year and one of the most historical
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place
in
overall
district. I have recently completed my Bachelor of Pharmacy which
is affiliated
with Gujarat Technological University. I am doing my IELTS at success overseas which
is situated
in
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Vidhyanagar
and it is
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most
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famous
academy in my
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Vidhyanagar
.
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IELTS essay My Introduction on my Studies

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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