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My favourite place i have visited explain why it is in

My favourite place i have visited explain why it is in EdBBq
Well, the place wich i like more is palakkyam thattu, it comes under kozhikode state, located in kerala. . I have visited this place 2 years before with my family. This place resembles me the real tropical rain forest, which I have seen only in films and videos. We travelled during rainy season, it is a hilly area with a huge water dam in the bottom. We travelled by a car, one side of the road is fully covered with wide variety of green plants and from the other side you will definitely enjoy the depths covered with mist.
Well, the place
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like more is
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palakkyam
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kozhikode
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kerala
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I have visited this place 2 years
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with my family. This place resembles me the real tropical rain forest, which I have
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seen
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in films and videos. We travelled during rainy season, it is a hilly area with a huge water dam in the bottom. We travelled by a car, one side of the road is
fully
covered with wide variety of green plants and from the other side you will definitely enjoy the depths covered with mist.
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IELTS essay My favourite place i have visited explain why it is in

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
99 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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