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My favorite gadgets is phone

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My favorite gadget is my phone I got it as a gift from my mom since I was studying year one everyday I spent almost 24 hours on my phone on social media and I love music so much so even when when I take a shower I always bring it with me it’s really important to me because I can keep in touch with my childhood friend by chatting with them and I’m a busy person so It helps me recognize my day with my phone. It has a great camera and I can keep all my memory into my phone. More over It’s helps with all knowledge by searching in google know about what happened in society that’s why can’t live without my phone
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. It has a great camera and I can
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IELTS essay My favorite gadgets is phone

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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