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My favorite gadgets is phone

My favorite gadgets is phone BwED5

My favorite gadget is my phone I got it as a gift from my mom since I was studying year one everyday I spent almost 24 hours on my phone on social media and I love music so much so even when when I take a shower I always bring it with me it’s really important to me because I can keep in touch with my childhood friend by chatting with them and I’m a busy person so It helps me recognize my day with my phone. It has a great camera and I can keep all my memory into my phone. More over It’s helps with all knowledge by searching in google know about what happened in society that’s why can’t live without my phone

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phone
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 it as a gift from my mom since I was studying year one everyday I spent almost 24 hours on my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
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love
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keep
 in touch with my childhood friend by chatting with them and I’m a busy person This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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helps
 me recognize my day with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
. It has a great camera and I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 all my memory into my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
. More over It’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 with all knowledge by searching in google know about what happened in society that’s why can’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
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