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my lovely and emotional mother

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In each person's life, everyone has a mother to be loved and taken care of, and so do I. Her name is Huong, she is 40 at the moment. She has short straight hair, medium height, and brown eyes. She works as an accountant at her company. Every morning, She wakes up at 6 o’clock to prepare breakfast and uniforms for us for going to school. Although we go to school by bus, my mom still carefully takes care of us until we get on the bus. Although she is very busy with work, she always leaves work early to come home to cook dinner for me and my siblings, her food is always delicious and various. Although she is quite strict, she is always a thoughtful and emotional mother. Whenever we have trouble with homework, mom is always ready to help us solve it. Mom always gives us useful advice and memorable lessons every time we make mistakes. Whenever she has free time, she usually relaxes by playing the game "candy crush" on her phone. In conclusion, my mother is the best number and irreplaceable person in my life.
In each person's life, everyone has a mother to be
loved
and taken care of, and
so
do I. Her name is
Huong
, she is 40 at the moment. She has short straight hair, medium height, and brown eyes. She works as an accountant at her
company
. Every morning, She wakes up at 6 o’clock to prepare breakfast and uniforms for us for going to school. Although we go to school by bus, my mom
still
carefully
takes care of us until we
get
on the bus. Although she is
very
busy with work, she always
leaves
work early to
come
home to cook dinner for me and my siblings, her food is always delicious and various.
Although
she is quite strict, she is always a thoughtful and emotional mother. Whenever we have trouble with homework, mom is always ready to
help
us solve it. Mom always gives us useful advice and memorable lessons every time we
make
mistakes. Whenever she has free time, she
usually
relaxes by playing the game
"
candy crush
"
on her phone.
In conclusion
, my mother is the best number and irreplaceable person in my life.
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IELTS essay my lovely and emotional mother

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
190 words
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