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Some humans trust cultural identification is how we become aware of ourselves as a part of a culture. This can truly be carried out via the language we use, the meals we frequently have, history or the apparel we frequently put on on unique occasions. Among these, I think history is the most important cultural identifier. The tradition and the values of the Vietnamese humans are intricately related to history. This is due to the fact what they trust and the way they behave these days has been guided through what came about withinside the past. History is a evidence of who we're and the usa we belong to. These are traditionally considered the right things to do in a community. Vietnamese humans frequently experience coming across history, touring museums, remembering significant activities in addition to responding to ancient and cultural activities. Although we're now in cutting-edge time, those traditions are nicely preserved respectably as a cultural stereotype. In short, history has pondered the moves and mind of Vietnamese humans as a standard cultural identity
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The tradition and the values of the Vietnamese
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humans
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intricately
related to
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. This is due to the fact what they trust and the way they behave these days has
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through what came about
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Vietnamese
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in addition
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activities.

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IELTS essay cultural identification history

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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