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My Family role in my Life

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Family is the integral part of one's life. It does not matter if you have a small or big family, as long as you have one. Family serves as the first school to childhood where we learns about various things. The basic knowledge about our culture and identity comes form our family only. All the goo habits an manners one has incorporated in there family only. Families are essential as they help in our growth they develop us into becoming a complete person with an individual identity. Coming to my family, My family is my strength and my family has been always by my side in ups and downs. They have taught me how to be a better person. My family consists of three siblings and my parents. In the family mother and father play vital role in each and every one life. In my life my mother is my strength. In every step of my she supported and encouraged me. She had worked through out the day to make us happy. She cooks for us, She take care of us. Even though when she is not feeling well still she make everything ready for us. She is most caring person in my life. My father he always work hard in order to satisfy our needs. He is the person with punctuality. I have learned rules and regulation by seeing my father. My siblings are my best friends on whom i can always fall back on. I am the younger in my family. My elders brother are like my friends where we share each and everything. We play among our selves we enjoy each and every moment spending with each other. They always help me in any situation. Simply i can say i cannot imagine my life with out them. They are responsible for creating a safe and secure environment for me at home. This is why, I love my family and family is more important to me on any other thing.
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Family
is the integral part of one's
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life
. It does not matter if you have a
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small
or
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big
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family
, as long as you have one.
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Family
serves as the
first
school to childhood where we
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learns
about various things. The basic knowledge about our culture and identity
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comes
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form
our
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family
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only
. All the goo habits
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an
manners one has incorporated in there
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family
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only
.
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Families
are essential as they
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help
in our growth they develop us into becoming a complete
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person
with an individual identity.

Coming to my
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family
, My
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family
is my strength and my
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family
has been always by my side in ups and downs. They have taught me how to be a better
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person
. My
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family
consists of three siblings and my parents. In the
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family
mother and father play vital role in
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each and every one
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life
. In my
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life
my mother is my strength.
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In
every step of my she supported and encouraged me. She had worked
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through out
the day to
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make
us happy. She cooks for us, She
The pronoun 'She' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "takes", "took".
take
care of us.
Even though
when she is not feeling well
still
she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "makes", "made".
make
everything ready for us.

She is
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most
caring
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person
in my
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life
. My father he always work
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hard
in order to satisfy our needs. He is the
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person
with punctuality. I have learned
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rules
and regulation by seeing my father. My siblings are my best friends on whom
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i
can always fall back on. I am the younger in my
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family
. My elders brother are like my friends where we share each and everything. We play among our selves we enjoy each and every moment spending with each other. They always
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help
me in any situation.
Simply
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i
can say
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i
cannot imagine my
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life
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with out
them. They are responsible for creating a safe and secure environment for me at home. This is why, I
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love
my
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family
and
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family
is more
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important
to me on any other thing.
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IELTS essay My Family role in my Life

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
332 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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